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| | The New Yorker: The Critics: Books (Site not responding. Last check: 2007-10-07) |
 | | Doubtful, distracting, and unwarranted commas turn up in front of restrictive phrases (“Naturally we become timid about making our insights known, in such inhospitable conditions”), before correlative conjunctions (“Either this will ring bells for you, or it won’t”), and in prepositional phrases (“including biblical names, and any foreign name with an unpronounced final ‘s’ ”). |
 | | The book also omits the serial comma, as in “eats, shoots and leaves,” which is acceptable in the United States only in newspapers and commercial magazines. |
 | | And she admits that her editors are continually removing the commas that she tends to place before conjunctions. |
| www.newyorker.com /critics/books?040628crbo_books1 (2559 words) |
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